Woah, cool track! All you need is another, catchier melody, so the drop won't feel that empty. Also, luv those drums <3. Loved the buid-ups and drops, and I liked the variation between them. (4.5 stars round up to 5 stars! eeeee)
Woah, cool track! All you need is another, catchier melody, so the drop won't feel that empty. Also, luv those drums <3. Loved the buid-ups and drops, and I liked the variation between them. (4.5 stars round up to 5 stars! eeeee)
That thing got me hard ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Groovy, and smexy!
Thx :)
Dude, you need more variation on your track. It feels bland and boring because of the lack of different melodies. Drums are kinda okay, but you should work more on the main melody. It's so repetitive that I can't even identify whether that part was the intro, build-up, or drop. Get well soon :>
There is no build-up, Intro or drop. The melody is from Super Mario 64, and that's the entire melody. It's a loop from a game, of course this is repetitive. IOt's a bootleg: it's nowhere near perfect.
No offense, but it is kinda bland and boring. The drums feel like an ordinary drum loop imo. What DAW do you use tho?
Sonar Platnium. Also, it's my first real song so it may be pretty bad at the moment. I hope to make better ones in the future. :)
EDIT: Sonar Platinum is actually Cakewalk by BandLab at the moment, just to clear up any confusion. :)
RAWWWWWWWWWRR
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Oh, it seems you have some bass too :D
Yes it is cool, but short. Awesome drop tho! I was expecting a second drop but it can stand alone with a single drop lol. Nice vocals, and pretty much great overall.
4.5 stars rounds up to 5 stars! (xD)
OHMY
Cooooool song! Definitely deserves 5 stars!
4 Stars!
Reasons:
1. It is satisfying to listen but not as satisfying as listening to the original.
2. The drop is pretty cool, but this could be better when you sticked to a dubstep remix. Anyways its good that you try new things, so keep it up :>
3. The vocals became a lot more sadder than the original, and I was expecting for a sad, dubstep drop, but its kinda good tho
Overall good, but should/might be much better if you actually tried to stick with your forte, but yea, never stop to try new things :3
-Jeemboo
Jeemboo is a solo music project and producer based and founded in the Philippines. He actively seeks to capture his feelings and express them into melodies, as he strongly believes that each melody is a story to be told; a journey to unfold.
High School Student
Philippines
Joined on 5/11/17